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"Up to the job?"

13 September, 2007

I once got into a bit of trouble on a discussion list for asserting that if an aspiring writer isn't reading the equivalent of two novels a month (a dozen short stories and a novella or two can substitute for a novel) then they couldn't possibly be literate enough to write fiction of their own. What I meant by that is that writing is a language, different from the spoken version of the same language--there are sufficiently different nuances and limitations to the two forms to require practice in both. If you don't use a language regularly, you lose it.

The number I picked was completely arbitrary. I've known good writers who don't read that much. But the one thing I found that they all had in common was there was a period in their childhood when they read a lot. Later on, someone pointed me to a neurological study that shows if a person doesn't start reading for pleasure by an early age (eight years old, I think it was) some language centers of the brain simply never develop. Period. The person has extreme difficulty parsing a compound-complex sentence.

Dorothy Sayers called people with this deficiency "formally literate." They may be able to read and write at or above "grade level." They may be extremely intelligent and able to carry on complex conversations verbally, but they're constantly misconstruing or misunderstanding written communication.

Unfortunately, I made this assertion on a discussion list which included a number of people who were constantly misconstruing and misunderstanding written communication. Which compounded the trouble.

One of the people who took exception to my comment went on a tirade about my own typos and related mistakes in posting. Particularly because my typos aren't limited to just transposing a few letters here and there--I will type entirely wrong words (I will usually spell them correctly, but they're the wrong word). I will change gears partway through a sentence without realizing it. If I do realize, there's a one-in-three chance that when I go back to fix it, I will miss part of what I meant to change.

All of which irritates and embarrasses me far more than they bother most of the readers. I try not to make the mistakes. I try to fix the mistakes when I make them. But I also try not to become so obsessive-compulsive about it that the o-c behaviours interfere with what I'm trying to accomplish.

Some people get a chuckle out of pointing out my typos because I am or have been an editor. Depending on the context of the conversation, sometimes I explain the difference between developmental editing and copy editing. A developmental edit entails analysing a story or article for it's structure, effectiveness, accessibility, and efficiency. It's mostly big picture stuff. Copy editing, by contrast, is about the mechanics of individual words and sentences.

One way of looking at it is to think about the difference between design and construction. Bad design and bad construction can both lead to failure, and so you want to get both as good as possible. But a great architect may be horrible at operating a table saw or hammering nails, whereas a great carpenter may be bad at designing.

In the original exchange that got me into hot water, my statement was analagous to saying that before you can build a house, you have to be familiar enough with how it all works so that you don't have to be reminded that the foundation must be poured before you try to shingle the roof. And the person who got upset was saying I didn't have the right to say that because I can't always hammer a nail in perfectly straight with only three swings of the hammer.

The specific criticism (I make a lot of typographical errors) was correct, but didn't invalidate my original statement (you must remain fluent with written language to write good fiction). There's also a very big difference between not being able to do something exactly right every time, and not even knowing the difference between doing it right and doing it wrong.


Grammar and spelling are important tools to the writer, but they aren't the only tools, and not always the most important ones. If the writer is willing to accept a little help--to spend the time necessary to get his or her work proofed and to make the corrections--being less-than-perfect with those particular tools isn't a major obstacle.

In other words, a house with a few bent nails in the frame may be a cherished home that protects its inhabitants for decades, sheltering them from the cold of winter and standing up to many storms. But a house built without a foundation, won't stand up to the job.

 

Honesty and the best story, and tell it the best you can. That's what matters.
--Judy Blume

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